This is a quadrille on the theme of dreams, which was the challenge set by whimzygizmo of dVerse Poets this week.
in dreams we are weightless
travellers with no baggage
holding tickets printed
with invisible ink
unfettered by expectation
it matters not when we arrive
nor where our winding journey began
our destination is unscheduled
in dreams we are winners
not just also-rans
We are winners in our dreams just to have them.
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This is just beautiful. No baggage, unfettered. Perfect.
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Thank you!
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I hope all your dreams come true, (the good ones). I like the references to luggage and tickets. It’s nice you don’t need them for this trip
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Lol, true. Thanks for reading and commenting!
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😁
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Deep and beautiful. Lovely!
Anna :o]
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Thank you!
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We are all winners…I like your dreams. I usually end up in a public place in just my underpants…
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Hahaha I think we’ve all been there! Thanks for stopping by!
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That’s the good dreams, of course. Then again, there are those . . . .
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True lol
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I love the lack of baggage and tickets. We certainly have enough in this life.
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I agree! Thanks for reading 😊
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“Travellers with no baggage holding tickets printed in invisible ink…”. What a stellar line! You’ve captured a dream perfectly.
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Stellar? Wow! Thank you Sarah! 😀
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“in dreams we are weightless”.. i love this!! ❤ And I couldn't agree more to this piece.
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Glad you like it and thanks for commenting, I really appreciate it!
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Oh, to be a weightless traveller with no baggage, then I could visit all those people I haven’t seen in years and all the new friends I’ve made at dVerse! I love this poem and I specially love the lines:
‘holding tickets printed
with invisible ink
unfettered by expectation’.
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It really is a dream, isn’t it? Thanks for the comment Kim!
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you broke free with this scheme of the dream – love it!
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Thanks!
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This is the best kind of dreams… wonderful
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If only they were more frequent! Lol
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This is an exciting take on dreams and possibility!
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Do you think so? Thank you!
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Lovely dreamland journeys…
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“also-rans” ha! Love that. We both put invisible ink in our poems!
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What a great argument!
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Thank you! Never thought of it as an argument, interesting!
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